This video is about how and what we should and could include in our film to make it better. One of the main improvement is to add comedy genre element as in to make it more comedy at the start of the film. As well as to emphasise the character's facial expression and emotion to make it look like how much the character within the film is hating her day since she's having a bad unlucky day.Other improvements were adding element of day dreaming or voice over for e.g she could day dream about spending money on her new clothes.
Sammah and Fahmi's view: Our film is comedy and drama genre and we understand the fact that we need to add comedy element more but at the same time we also want to add drama genre element. As our film has a moral at the end of the film it wouldn't be suitable to add too many comedy scenes. In terms of facial expressions, this is one of our biggest improvement and hence we will add new scenes to make it more funny in particular scenes such as when the character in the film misses her bus we could add more comedy scenes in that particular scene. And we don't want to add voice over because our film is based on the facial expressions and we believe that since we are going to add new scenes it would add the comedy element within our film. At the end of the day we want the actress to portray our feelings of anger, frustration etc through her expressions and that's what makes our film unique.
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