These are some of the ideas which I have wrote down. All these ideas are about new scenes which we could add. Out of all these ideas the main scenes we picked
were mainly for Esssex road south:
- One idea was to re-shoot the scene of precious walking clumsy and slowly to imply the bad luck day she's having before she misses the bus.
- Add a scene of either a person annoying such as talking to precious even though she doesn't want to talk to anyone. / someone farting next to her.
- Add a scene of her going next to the bus stop after missing the bus .
- Out of all these we decided to use the scene of someone farting next to her and then adding another person coming next to her sitting down but then that person think precious is the one who farted.For that scene me and Sammah will act. So when it's my turn to act Sammah will film and when it's Sammah's turn to act I will film. Then we will add the scene of her walking away from the bus stop and going towards the park.
Abbotts Park
- Re-shoot the scene of precious before going inside the park: add expressions (close up medium shot)
- Re-shoot the scene of her finding the letter and when she gets up her skirt gets ripped( medium shot)
- Add a scene of someone looking at precious (2nd day visit to park) when she starts leaving the park (point of view shot)
- Shoot a scene from behind her when she touches the gate and looks back to see if anyone is following her.
Another scene we want to add is precious looking at the shops especially of her looking at clothes model and then film her (close up)taking out the envelope from her jacket. Then she starts smiling and walks off.
Our main target for our shooting is
- Get out the expressions : emphasise certain facial expression to demonstrate how much bad luck she's having.
- Add more comedy element and drama at the end.
- Do a scene of her looking at her phone and seeing a text from a charity saying thank you to her for her donation
- Try to emphasise comedy element in the first few scenes.
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